Talk:Kogarasumaru/@comment-84.63.46.139-20161118231334

I'd like to propose some different translations for two of his quotes.

Imho, in his citadel line the phrase "current form" does not point to himself, but the modern blade (because of the の combi between the words), so 我は今の形の日本刀が生まれ出づる時代の剣 should mean something like "I am a blade from the age when the current form of (japanese) swords was born/began to emerge".

And for heavy dmg repairs, I think instead of him leaving his children to the saniwa, he leaves his tasks to his children b/c he enters repairs, so "Leave it... to the children for a while", since we have 子らに instead of 子らを, and まかせ is imperative speech (aka "do something!"), afaik.

What do other saniwas think? Not quite sure how editing works in this wiki, I didn't want to just overwrite stuff without permission.