Talk:Hotarumaru/@comment-72.174.66.19-20160608025656

There is something horribly wrong with the grammar of the first Trivia.

My suggested fixed passage:

''When the sword was badly damaged because of the mowing movements that Korezumi made when he faced his enemies, he rested at the foot of Mt. Aso and fell asleep out of exhaustion. He had a strange dream that a swarm of fireflies (hotaru) sat on top of his sword, making it glow in the dark. The next morning, much to his confusion, the chips and cuts on the damaged sword seemed to be gone. The sword, later named “Hotarumaru”, was kept in the Aso shrine as a family treasure. ''