Talk:Sayo Samonji/@comment-209.6.72.203-20161031103224

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Saw some untranslated lines, so here are translations (and one edit, sorry!), all for the Kiwame lines. I’m afraid of editing the page myself even after reading the tutorial because I’m clumsy lol. If there's a better place to put comments like this, please let me know!

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Sortie kick-off: Who should I kill…to clear away this darkness……?

translations

Duel: Even if I kill you, I’m sure this gloom* won’t be dispelled. It’s simply because it’ll be painful if I lose.

[*I don’t really like the word gloom here. Killing them won’t cheer him up. Suggestions?]

Victory: What should I do…to feel pleased about this……?

Horsekeeping: I wonder, how do I appear to the horses now..?

Horsekeeping (done): I hope the horses’ lives aren’t being shortened.

[I’m assuming he means taking them out into battle is shaving down their lifespans, but I guess it could also be something about himself…? It doesn't really say.]

Fieldwork (done): Though there’s probably no worry of famine…

Sparring (done): …Thank you. For guarding against me successfully.