Thread:Kitttn/@comment-28150993-20161219124050

Hi Kitttn! Sorry to bother you, but just wondering about the translation of the Ookanehira tweet. Can I make some suggestions? For the second sentence: He's known as the Yokozuna of swords together with Doujigiri Yasutsuna, who is a Tenka Goken, and they're seen as rivals. Or something like that..? I just think the fact that they're both known as Yokozuna while only Doujigiri is a Tenka Goken is important info.

And for the last sentence (because I laughed out loud when I first read the tweet) : He's observed by Uguisumaru who came from the same area as him. The observe has the same sentiment as observation diary, which makes the whole situation with Uguisumaru quite questionable (???)

Sorry for my awkward wording and thanks a lot for your quick and hard work, as usual! Ookanehira hype!  